Wednesday, September 24, 2008

journal #4

- Bartholomae means that the student must create in their own perspective of how basically everything in their sorrounding is denotated as. Basically to work in all fields and in every aspect of the college world. To "invite the university" is also another way of saying that students have to find their inner writer. Since college is a much higher scale than high school, it's a way to broaden vocabulary, build sentence structure, and create a wider outlook on life.

- Bartholomae is basically saying that when people become college students, they have the right to become whoever they want. They are most opened to opportunity, to create something new, and claim an original idea.

- The two examples are basically noncomparable... One is that of the student who ventures outside of the basic writing would to create a new aspect of everything; then on the other hand is the student who is trapped beyond compare in the basic writing world... Only just to get by.


- Greg Moppert

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